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Comments on The FAN for 11th May 2010 in The FAN Pages: 1 Reply

Comments on The FAN for 11th May 2010

B.T. Isaac
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   14th May 2010, 18:57    
And why doesn't anyone point out the big error I made in the second panel? You'd think if there's someone reading this, they'd at least ask "Who's saying what?".
 
     
 
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   15th May 2010, 02:39    
I imagine we're all too polite to mention. Also, I can't see anything wrong with the dialogue in the original - but should I read something into the parts that you removed?
 
     
 
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   15th May 2010, 05:54    
Seriously, I see nothing wrong with the second panel. The dialogue is obviously Simon's, who is simply "Off Camera" at the moment. A lot of webcomics do that.
 
     
 
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   15th May 2010, 12:50    
Well the original had a black line pointing at Jakob in the second panel, because I wasn't paying attention. The lines in the fifth panel were twice as long and placed UNDER Jakob, also making the impression that he's the one saying them. And darnit Jim, stop being too polite. If you see something wrong just say it. If I keep making mistakes no one is going to read it.
 
     
 
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