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Comments on The FAN for 6th August 2007

B.T. Isaac
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Posts: 346 		   7th August 2007, 03:43    
This one was fun to draw (especially panel 2), but panels 2, 3 and 4 are a bit rough I really should learn how to draw stairs
I had to redraw Marsha several times until I could find a good point of view. I wanted her to look mysterious, and somehow, I'm not pleased with how she looks right now.
The rectangular text boxes are said by Simon, off panel. I had to remove the hand lettering in this one, because it was rather crapy.
 
     
 
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Posts: 1 		   10th August 2007, 16:16    
Interesting. I admit that the stairs could do with some work, but if you hadn't of mentioned anything I would've assumed they were broken or uneven. As for making this new character look mysterious, well, you could've gone with a front view with the face shadowed. But I think it looks OK as it is.
 
     
 
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